Really great melodies throughout the entire song.
I liked it within the first 10 seconds.
You nailed that ATB bubbly-sound at the beginning.
Perhaps add some more emphasis to a beat in the first 1:30 minutes. The arp in the background coming in created anticipation and I expected some sort of climax for a while, but it never came. Add in some drums that build up to 2:03 and perhaps a crash or something would smooth it out. This is all my opinion of course.
yeah i know i suck with climaxes! better just stay to an ambient feel i guess! thanks for the feedback!
This is a good start. The second half is very good, perhaps move one of the melodies down an octave so you have the nice resonance of lower piano notes. To get a better piano effect. Try changing the piano type to "Dark Piano," it sounds more realistic. Than put a very heavy reeverb. It sounds very convincing.
The frequencies are way messed up. That's what happens when you use like 2 arps. There were no transitions. Keep trying!
Btw, thanks for the shitty review. I figured I'd rate all your songs too.
Huh? Shitty review? I dont remember that.
The beats weird. Too simple! Keep trying!
I didnt find anything wierd about it, but I guess Ill try something different later.
Thanks for the feedback.
But you're getting closer. Doesn't really loop and it's simple! Keep trying!
Thanks for the feedback.
Er... What is this? Sounds like random noises all thrown together. Keep trying!
Thanks for the feedback, I guess.
This is great. :)
Incredible. I'm going to use this in some sort of machinima or montage. Message me and I'll link you to it when I've finished.
Get a new singer.
This monotone singing is terrible. It's completely and noticeably auto tuned.
It's extremely difficult for me to find music I like and I'm frustrated because I've found some all over your page, but the singing in ALL of them is so goddamn terrible. It's like you've taken the step towards professional electronic music but you're still lagging behind with the 11th grade untalented band singer. Either cut out vocals or get a new singer, please.
Thanks for the review. Vocals is something we're working on.
This song is super kickass and I love it quite a bit...but goddamn it, whenever the vocals come in, I'm filled with anger...they're terrible. They don't match the song, and worse, they're so similar to your other songs. The song is completely excellent but just the combination of the singer's voice and the notes he's singing, they just don't match at all. I'm apologizing because I had to say it.
Good work otherwise.
Thanks for the review! With some people, the vocals were really liked and with others they weren't. We definitely understand that. Also, this song was one of our first with vocals so they are admittedly not that great. While we think they were okay, compared to our current stuff, they are crap - so we can agree with you there. Although, we do think the song is less without the vocals, but that's just our opinion.
Thanks again for reviewing, it's always nice to hear what we need to work on.
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