Really great melodies throughout the entire song.
I liked it within the first 10 seconds.
You nailed that ATB bubbly-sound at the beginning.
Perhaps add some more emphasis to a beat in the first 1:30 minutes. The arp in the background coming in created anticipation and I expected some sort of climax for a while, but it never came. Add in some drums that build up to 2:03 and perhaps a crash or something would smooth it out. This is all my opinion of course.
yeah i know i suck with climaxes! better just stay to an ambient feel i guess! thanks for the feedback!
This is a good start. The second half is very good, perhaps move one of the melodies down an octave so you have the nice resonance of lower piano notes. To get a better piano effect. Try changing the piano type to "Dark Piano," it sounds more realistic. Than put a very heavy reeverb. It sounds very convincing.
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